Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Fancy`s Wings Comments

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Fancy's Wings

How I praise thy sweetness
that ever grows since ancient times
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Bri Edwards 06 July 2013

i appreciate the rhymes and the poet notes, but i still have trouble understanding. on to another one. thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2013

i appreciate the rhymes but i have trouble understanding this....even after reading the poet notes, which i always appreciate seeing. but thanks for sharing. i'll look for another of gulsher's poems.

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Mark Dillon 09 November 2012

i grew up in wide open plains and eve, can't imagine being without it, every season brings a different beauty to the land, great writing thanks for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 04 November 2012

A beautiful nature poem - well done Gulsher.

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Valerie Dohren 04 November 2012

A beautiful nature poem - well done Gulsher.

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Valerie Dohren 04 November 2012

A beautiful nature poem - well done Gulsher.

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Zahra Shariat 01 November 2012

you have brought up many beautiful words together, it seems like you are still concerned about the Rhyme, is n't it?

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Asif Andalib 31 October 2012

Nice write. I hope good nature will make your wings of fancy strong

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Jahan Zeb 31 October 2012

Word given to imaginations and put in front of the readers' eye. A very good description of the nature. Good work

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Hazel Durham 30 October 2012

Beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature in all it's glory!

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