Fancy's Redemption Comments

He fancied curly hair dangling over his face and when he tried to playfully curl her hair over again, Time suddenly stilled and his arms, slumped and dangled on his either side. That mute and fanciful image of embrace, A heavenly moment of love merging with love. The intense longing of a lonely aged soul to be conjoined with his lady love is beautifully presented. Indeed a lovely write! A 10