Saturday, June 28, 2008

Fancy Dancy Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

She’s a fancy,
dancy girl
with her
diamonds
...
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Carolyn Brunelle
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Fred Babbin 28 June 2008

Love the last two lines. The rest of the poem seems like such a cliche, but those lines really make it into something worth reading.

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