Saturday, August 31, 2013

Fancy Dancer Comments

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Fable me, like your fancy dancer
Trouble me like the corner bum
Life ahead it stands to suffer
Drink me death from a bottle of rum
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Jodie Hardy 01 September 2013

Beautifully written x x

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Amy De Guzman 01 September 2013

nicely written poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 August 2013

beautiful write.'Drink me death from a bottle of rum Twirl away from me like a twister' is very nice.

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