Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Fancy Dan Comments

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Fancy Dan had a big sedan
which he raced around the road,
its alright he told everyone
I have driven around these roads for years
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David Harris
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Tsira Goge 06 October 2009

David, What remarkable history - a lesson.... Such Fancy Dans at us too will be lot-of....10... Tsira

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Carol Gall 06 October 2009

nice light poem david e njoyed reading 10

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Patti Masterman 06 October 2009

This is a cute poem. I once had my face rearranged by another car that didn't want to stop at the red light, lol. Luckily it healed up; was the rearranged ribs that bothered me more! Enjoyed reading about Fancy Dan and his big sedans!

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