Thursday, September 12, 2024

Fancy Cars Comments

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Fancy cars and diamond rings
Silken gowns and sparkly things
Chains of gold and follies grand
Mansions built on feudal land
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Valerie Dohren
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Joe Hughes 13 September 2024

Valerie, A voice from the past here. The one star should be 5! The site gets it wrong. Love this poem with its beautiful, non contrived, imaging. Many new descriptions with no clichés on board. I haven't posted for some years - the muse still visits but less frequently. Best wishes and thank you.

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Joe Hughes 13 September 2024

Valerie,

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2024

What we desire and what we should shun - beautifully stated in a lovely poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2024

Nature's full of precious things

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