Sunday, September 16, 2012

Fancy Comments

Rating: 4.0

If verse is the truth,
Does any poet speak it?
If it's the world of fancy,
A fancy of delight,
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Jahan Zeb
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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

In this world it seems there are the rich and the poor. Some have plenty while others have nothing. The children I cry for to be fed properly. lovely sad thoughtful poem

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 September 2012

A brisk sublime poem! I vote 4 it. So nice to meet yor poems.!

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Saadat Tahir 19 September 2012

over the ages they have been referred to the hoards, the mob, the urchins, the riffraff, the commoner...man in the street...and the list goes on. you have written well to portray the plight liked reading it...very nice cheers

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Payal Parande 18 September 2012

brilliant thought to put in front....and so well written well done indeed thank you for sharing sir love payal

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