Fancy Poem by Matloob Bokhari

FANCY
I listened the sound of refreshing rain,
And heard the dearest song of nightingale.
I saw Baby walking in the gentle rain.
Fleecy clouds laying arms round her neck.
Silver drops in pure delight kissing her lips.
Sweet breeze blowing through her hair.
Rainbow by raindrops studded on her rosy cheeks.
I woke up when she called my name.
My soul knelt down to thank my Kind Lord
Who blessed me fancy - the greatest artist.
O! When the door of my soul is opened,
Ideas descend as soft rain from the sky.
Sitting alone by the fire in my study, I hear
Whistling wind and symphony of rain drops.
I smell wet soil, perfume of meadow flowers;
See Baby appearing as a column of light
And the sky with rainbow in her hand.

COMMENTS: FANCY
Fatima Tauheeda: Its amazing respected sir Matloob Bokhari
Nuzhat Saadia Qureshi: You are magician.....ap k leeynkuch b likhnasoorajh ko chraghdhakaykimanadhn! ! ! !
Bindi Sharma: When the door of my soul..... Great read
Alby Raymond Parackal: Marvelous poetry
Beatriz Romero: Beautiful poem.
Aamir Shahzad: Beautiful. Reflection of a sensitive soul.
Naheed Khan: Rich style. Fascinating..
سعیدسادهو: What a different shaded and full of feeling piece of poetry
EdemOkon: Well weaved with stunning imagery
سعیدسادهو: What a different shaded and full of feeling piece of poetry. The scenes you create are too poetic like utopia
Aamir Shahzad: Beautiful.Reflection of a sensitive soul.
Naheed Khan: Rich style. Fascinating....!


Kristine Nicholson: Lovely poetic incantation!

RukiahAnnuar: Beautiful write... indeed love is the key to unlock heaven's door... love transcends.

Annie Hilwani: It is really beautiful, like a bunch of fresh rose.

Stephanie Doty: Oh my, oh my, oh my -- THIS poem is so lovely and I cannot tell you how delighted I am to read it. This morning is filled with surprises of love and I could not be more grateful -- never in a million years, not ever. Namaste.

Aarti Khurana: Love is an eternal vivacity that only two loving passionate souls can Feel.

RukiahAnnuar: awesome poem... bleeding ink magnificently on the page. Such a wondrous gift... for love of poetry, love~faith~gratitude~ ... my heart sings reading your poetry and touches my soul to the silent symphony of your poetic heart

Gaudreault C Marie: hhhhhhhhhhh.. I am speechless with the lines.. and also with the imagery.. I love them both so much! ! .. I am fascinated by your works.. and cannot thank you enough for the pleasure it brings.... .. never stop this.. you are a treausre! ! xoxoxo Cmarie..

Margaret Gudkov: ohhh wow.. Fancy is such beautiful write.. my soul danced with your words!

Carmel Mawle: So beautiful. I especially love the fleecy clouds laying arms around her neck.

Jann Gail Jones: Your words were so precious. They brought such beautiful images to mind and softness and beauty to my heart that tears welled in my eyes. I was reading and dancing. Such magical words Thank you for having such a beautiful heart to be able to write such beautiful things. I thank God for sending blessed people like you. You poems give me faith in humanity. Blessings to you!

Matthew Knaub: Do you know a book called 'A River Sutra' by Indian writer (forget name) , but it was very good and I wonder if your short fictions sound similar. The depth reminds me of poets Kennan and Pathegon, however the theme you present in Fancy is unique, never read before. It is very uplifting, seductive and moral some. Are you really originally from Pakistan, but how you write such a beautiful English?
Marietta Mardirossian: I always read your poems, your words are always heart touching, I admire how your ink flows so beautifully, YOU ARE SHINING AS THE SUN. I LOVE THE WAY YOU PUT UR WORDS JUST IN THE RIGHT PLACES.. Matloob you seem to be god to create world out of love.
Dorothy A. Holmes: A beautiful verse...from heart to open page, a poet's love song!
Bianca: Really beautiful imagery in this one....i love it