Thursday, November 6, 2014

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Why we try to twist the truth?
Just to keep supremacy -
To be called great,
The thing which you borrowed,
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Aftab Alam
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Matthias Pantaleon 09 November 2014

Aftab, my friend. Its good to read from your beautiful lines. I love the message in your poem. Its true, many people convert other people' property into theirs directly or indirectly. Yes...we have seen all this things and its so sad. But I will advice, next time make each stanza in your poem the same number of lines. If u want to write 3lines, fine, let all be three line or you should as well mix them all together as one. Nice mesage you have in your poem though...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2014

Many try to twist the truth but why we do not know. They even do not know that truth can neither be supressed nor be diverted. Truth has power to come up automatically and ever victorious. Yes every creative property has copy right of owner and should not be violated at any cost. Nicely raised the voice through beautiful poem. Supportive towards truth.

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