Friday, March 8, 2019

Fanatic Love Comments

Rating: 3.7

Sleep gone away saying goodbye
Stars are wishing me good luck
Moon is teasing me with sizes
They all know I am trapped in fanatic love
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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2020

Loveliest poem you worded here. A brilliant quatrain is created.I have enjoyed this amazing poem. Thank you for sharing

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 July 2020

Such a nice start, Mic Jack. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Julia Luber 09 March 2019

Cute haiku about the proportions of the moon being reflective of 'crazy/fanatical love'.

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Chinedu Dike 09 March 2019

Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Mic.

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