Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Fan Comments

Rating: 3.8

It stayed there hanging,
Motionless, airless though.
Rusted, jammed,
Outdated.
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Khaleelulla syed.A
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Bancroft Boreland 20 June 2011

in all honesty i am a bit puzzled by this poem. why did you use the title 'fan'?

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Pamuditha Zen Anjana 02 June 2011

It would have been better if you haven't used 'FAN' as the title.... But that's just me! ! ! ! Other than that it's Great! ! ! ! I liked the use of hope throughout... You have dared to do something which most of us wouldnt risk doing! ! ! ! ! Modern! ! !

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Craig Mize 01 June 2011

Another good poem with a whole lot of hope lol

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2011

u adopt very impressive way to define ur message great........ ur modern style is also very expressive thanks to entertain us by such a nice poem... God blessed u

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Yll L 10 May 2011

thats strange! hahaha! i like the msg of this..

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