It stayed there hanging,
Motionless, airless though.
Rusted, jammed,
Outdated.
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It would have been better if you haven't used 'FAN' as the title.... But that's just me! ! ! ! Other than that it's Great! ! ! ! I liked the use of hope throughout... You have dared to do something which most of us wouldnt risk doing! ! ! ! ! Modern! ! !
u adopt very impressive way to define ur message great........ ur modern style is also very expressive thanks to entertain us by such a nice poem... God blessed u
in all honesty i am a bit puzzled by this poem. why did you use the title 'fan'?