The world is full of unhappy places,
For only the rich can stuff their faces...
Africa, to be most specific,
has food supply no-so -terrific
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I'd say you have a winner there, Lee! Two winners...your son and his work here. How'd he get so knowledgeable about putting history and facts into a poem? More to genetics than meets the eye! ! ! xxxElysabeth
Glad to find someone who is trying to help desperate people. Poets have done a lot in the past addressing castratrophies and other calamities. Sometimes the world listens and responds, hopefully this poem will help send a louder message.
Wow, amazing write, quite factual infact. This is something i really feel bad about as a human being, as its now 2007 and people are still living in poverty...don't even ave clean water etc..all the things we take for granted...we so need to pull ourselves together as a race, and put money and politics aside..people's lives are at stake here....5 stars my young friend..
This is definitely one amazing poem from one AMAZING MAN! ! ! Lee, this kids is truly one of a kind! Please tell him to keep on writing and publish his books! I love all of you so much. All of your kids are very gifted like you and Dave. I am very proud of ALL of you. XOXOXO ;) Cecelia
Like Father, like Son...Lee.I think you got something special, here...that is other than yourself! lol! David...A sterling piece of literary crafting, indeed....Now, i want you to take my advice, & stay away from this Site, as you most definitely pose an imminent threat on me, as well as your poor Dad...LOL! KEEP THAT PEN PUMPIN' DAVID! You have ' THE GIFT', ...Use it with pride & good health... F. HAVE 'THE gIFT
Terrific write on an important subject that too often is passed over. -chuck
David N. Degnan, A star in the making, well done David this holds much compassion and care for others, the world needs qualities such as these, Your words open up the question...what more can we do to help Love duncan X
Thank you very much Lee you have seen the dark side of the world.
A 10 from me.David a lovely sensitive true poemo.Great work amigo. All the best Roger
I can see that poetry runs in the family. I hope that when your son becomes famous someday, he'll remember that I predicted it.