Monday, December 19, 2011

Family Secrets Comments

Rating: 3.4

They told my cousin Rowena not to marry
Calvin―she was too young, just eighteen,
& he was too dark, too too dark, as if he
had been washed in what we wanted
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Toi Derricotte
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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2020

Really an interesting story told with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Alouwou Mandjah 12 March 2020

Hey family, cousin Rowena and cousin Calvin got married, just keep it secret

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 March 2020

All is fair in love and war. It is very difficult to stop young lovers to change their mind. It is better to let them do s they like. Nice poem. Enjoyed the story.

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2020

When Rowena and Calvin are happy with the arrangement, others have no business to intervene. Love is deeper than the colour of the skin. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 March 2020

still around the world superstition lives lively many society, many families on the path of destruction for this type prejudice let's rescue the world nation from meaningless beliefs and superstitions! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 March 2020

Beautifully inscribed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2020

CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Most deserving.I have enjoyed this poem sublimest. A 10 full score for the brilliant poem. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy family.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 March 2019

Many families have many prejudices. Sometimes, they get freed from them under unexpected circumstances. Congratulations to the poet on his poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 March 2019

An intimate family secret unfolded very adroitly.

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Ianna 12 March 2019

thankyou for sharing this poem, each family has its story

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 March 2019

She was too young! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 March 2019

A nice poem on social stigma family has to go through by practicing prejudice. Loved the message in the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2019

A fine narrative poem which has a social message for each family, especially those living by orthodox or regressive practices. Thanks, Toi Derricotte, for a meaningful poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 March 2019

A great poem by Toi Derricotte........

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A real life experience so common.Enjoyed reading it.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 18 January 2015

A real life experience, looks like. Seems that human feelings on matters close to heart erupt somewhat similarly, universally, irrespective of color, creed or caste where ever people live. Thanks for sharing.

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David Slater 18 January 2014

It seems amazing to me that such prejudice could exist in a people who have suffered so much from prejudice.

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Dave Walker 19 December 2011

Like it. Enjoyed reading it. A great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, War Of Goodwill.

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Toi Derricotte

Toi Derricotte

Hamtramck, Michigan
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