Saturday, October 29, 2011

Family Of Lies Comments

Rating: 4.2

I hear of the things
That their son did
He should have been hanged
but he is free
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Dave Alan Walker
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2018

They are lost and forgotten souls In a family of lies Sitting there blind as evil slithers round their hearts and minds....so touching and true. A beautiful poem so nicely executed, Thanks for sharing.

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Sokal Roy 09 November 2011

beautiful poem good thought

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Pari Dharawat 08 November 2011

Nicely written, meaningful. Justice needs to be prevailed, come what may

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Stan Petrovich 07 November 2011

It has been said that a man of perfect thought would be a superman. I agree, But thoughts are not deeds or we would all be hanging from that tree,

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

Now it's time For justice to be done There is no escape from what was done there is no escape of any of our deed. great poem. xlent. very rare person think over such matter.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 06 November 2011

they will get what they deserve later in life nice poem good thought

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So! ! Above Par! ! i love it my good sir. great expressions

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Prachi Agrawal 05 November 2011

amazing work..........i loved it

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Prachi Agrawal 05 November 2011

amazing work..........i loved it

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But an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth got the world no where. instead, love ur enemies, love all. The greater reward comes from his repentant heart. it was well written.

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Crimson Love 04 November 2011

Such a beautiful poem, intense, and truly splendid. I enjoyed it.

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Cosmic Dreamer 03 November 2011

A lie can only take care of the present, it has no future... Guilt is a burden that will eventually wear down the toughest of men... Very nicely expressed poem...

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Tasha Scott 02 November 2011

this is really good! ! ! ! !

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Stefanie Fontker 02 November 2011

People seldom get what they deserve. We live in a shallow world. Beautiful work, my friend.

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Hans Vr 02 November 2011

Somehow there is the unescapable law of compensation, so well written about by RW Emerson. IN the mean time let's pray for them.

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(De Va) 01 November 2011

great poem....I believe that we do reap what we sow.....You inspire me...hugs n smiles.n blessings

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Clarence Prince 01 November 2011

I think that those who do wrongs, might have the devil inside them, Dave!

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Clarence Prince 01 November 2011

I think that those who do wrongs, might have the devil inside them, Dave!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 November 2011

Let's hope justice will be done... sometimes it's fickle.

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John wake 01 November 2011

really cool, the blindness of pple family image

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