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"Vasudhaiva kutumbakam" says Indian philosophy. Profound and pertinent.

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This is a nicely written poem with a large, embracing, very warm spirit. I think in places you are omitting articles that are really required in English. For example: There is always [an] exchange of Embraces and obeisances Here at this home. All the members Bear [the] same five components Or if you switch to the plural form you can drop the article. For instance: There [are] always [exchanges] of Embraces and obeisances Here at this home.

Enjoyed read! For example all people are but a huge family of Adam and Eve.

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poetry Sir...It has generated a positive attitude...there are a lot of creatures of god...one among the dynasty of creatures is human and we silly human beings are on the urge of finding faults in others....we share the same earth, sky, light, air, water; then why do we make differences in between us....You have conveyed a great idea through your poem sir....

Nice, my home is your home, and this earthly home is where all are welcome without fear of discrimination. Thank you for sharing a peace of yourself.

Sir, I get the feeling that you are more comfortable writing in your native tongue. When I read this poem, I notice that it meanders into prose and tends to become prosaic. The poem seems to be a translation into English or something that you have written in another language. It is full of your philosophy, and I'm not sure whether than philosophy is right, like 'the three principles of goodness, passion and ignorance'. Who gave you that idea? Keats talks about beauty and truth in his Ode, and it makes more sense. But your statement is just 'made into the air' and makes no sense, Neither do you try to explain it. I believe the poem can be trimmed a great deal. What I can't understand is the stupid flattery of your reviewers. If you fall into the snare of seeking favorable comments, you will end up in a ditch. Please give up writing in a foreign language. Use your own native tongue, and you will be welcome!

A very creative and compelling composition!

Well understood about the society, world.thanks for sharing.

Home is the warmest place in heart. My dear, You are my inseparable part/ I am Your fragment You are the whole I liked the lines. Beautiful.

All the members Bear same five components Earth sky light air water, nice piece love it

You are a very great writer. I enjoy the read

a recipe of Love embroidered in the heart of men, you make every inch a place of honor and hope; such passion brings your prose in the echole on of pen, wonderful comes within the lines of poerty you extra. thank you for sharing and God bless

The essence of our philosophy has found its expression in this poem. Beautiful.

True, the entire human race of this earth is a family and we all are dependent to each other in one way or other., rightly it's addressed here.

Yes, it is of a truth. We are all family and a part of this vast earth. All are interwoven together. very inspiring.

good thinking! Everybody must think the same way!

How nice it would turn if the world becomes a home to all of us..................instead a war zone...

an ecocentric worldview. If all men view the world as you do, we won't have much ecological problem today. nice thought.

Same product different shapes; same clay different mold and same thing in different colours. We are all from the soil.