Family Meeting, A Real Event, Last Chance { Please Read Carefully) Comments

Ah yes... the intricacies of family... nice poem, Ellias... Terry

An interesting and nice wite about the complex nature of families specially when you all meet up! ! Thanks for sharing!

READ UNWRITTEN SOUL'S COMMENT BELOW! ellias, it is difficult to be a teenager, or ANY age, and have family members disagree with you or find fault with you. since i have not lived as an iranian, nor have i known your family, i can not know how much pressure is on you or how much pressure you can take. maybe you are putting too much pressure on yourself. the poem almost makes ME feel uncomfortable and i'm not even there! thank goodness, i think, for mr. kiyani. but maybe it would just be better if he did not suggest prolonging your deadline to find a guest or guests to visit. it all seems a bit unnecessary to me.............but i am not in your situation, nor would i want to be. good luck, but try not to BEG. some people think begging is unbecoming. i don't mind begging as long as the begger is reasonable and doesn't get nasty if he/she does not get what she/he wants. as for the structure, grammar, spelling, etc. of the poem..........i'll send you a message about it. thanks for sharing. bri p.s. i am satisfied to walk a hundred yards to visit my neighbors chuck and karen. and READ the comment below by Unwritten Soul.

this is a very supreme poem.i believe in your talent and the humanity inside you and i am certain that one day you are going to propagandize the rich culture of our country. we are all the member of a family.a poem hunter family. ~nb

Let me clear things here...Ellias was having a family meeting actually and they met in their Holy month..and he previously asked by his family about the guest(s) from other countries that he should invite. This is his family tradition to introduce his culture and country to other people in the world, and previously his family ask him to invite his dearly friend to have a good time. I never meet Ellias but i know what and who is good, i trust him as a great person..i hope there will be a good news for him about it sooner..anybody wants to try their rich culture...a great ancient historical city, if i have enough time i would love to be having great time indulge the Persia moment..Just free to ask if you want to try, his family is very nice, trust me! ! ..and Ellie..reading your work always amazing, with you nice structure and flow..lovely! Be happy my lil sweety_SOul

a good read about your family reunion

a good write about your family reunion.

Its a nice poem about the family get together.

You left me in doubt! ! If it's a family reunion or religiosity about! ! I think the two intentions, compose very well your poem.