Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Family History Part 05: Little Eb Makes His Escape Comments

Rating: 4.3

When my great-grandfather,
Ebeneezer Williams was eleven
years old, he was herding a dozen
cattle from one mountain area
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Cowboy Ron Williams
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Susan Williams 14 November 2023

enjoyed this glimpse of history --I wish my grands had lived long enough to share their life stories with me--in poetic format or not! thank you for sharing

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Richard Wlodarski 01 November 2023

And now you've passed on a chapter of your family's history to us grateful readers. What a miraculous story! Thoroughly enjoyed this very worthy POD! Congratulations, Cowboy Ron on that honour!

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2023

Congratulations Cowboy Ron Williams for your poem being selected Poem of the Day for the second time!

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Belle Ringer 01 November 2023

You've made a sale; fantastic tale! I bought it all the way! This has been chosen to spotlight the second time today!

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Kim Barney 01 November 2023

Ron, HUGE congratulations! ONCE AGAIN, this poem has been chosen, not as MEMBER poem of the day, but as THE poem of the day! A wonderful story, and you told it well!

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Susan Williams 21 January 2023

I don't agree with your assessment---your tales have scenes painted with words, and there is the beat of horses' hooves giving your work its rhythm and rhyme... and we hear voices behind the words---tis poetry

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Jim McGill 14 January 2023

Story, imagery; it's all there. It's a poem. Good work.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

A beautifully crafted poem well conveyed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

Sometimes when we are at the brink of death or impending death, it is where.at our best.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

A wonderful and interesting story of courage of a great grandfather. Very entertaining.

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bri edwards 23 December 2020

THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint.

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Varsha M 18 October 2020

Yes that is really true. That is how miraculous escapes happen. I really enjoyed this story. Beautiful.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

Poetic family hostory Interesting

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2020

2 – Once, visiting Niagara Falls with my folks, a woman's hankie blew into the Niagara River, just downstream from the American Falls. I jumped into the river, from the international bridge, almost grabbed the hankie, but didn't catch up to it till we both emerged from the swirling cataracts 1/2 mile downstream. The End bri :)

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2020

1 – i almost decided to NOT read this since there are already so many comments. ok, i'll read it. Now, THAT'S almost a " tall tale" , ...but i believe it. Of course stuff like that happened to me all the time in my youth. (cont.)

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Suresh Kumar Ek 29 September 2020

Family history can be a good poetry Here is the example

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Khairul Ahsan 20 September 2020

'I don't pretend that this is a poem' (from your 'Poet's Notes') - who says it's not? I loved it so much that I gave full marks to it in the rating,5/5! You are a great storry teller through poetry. Loved the happy ending! Best wishes, dear poet, greetings from Bangladesh!

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 September 2020

By the time he got his head above water, the cattle and his captors were no longer visible.......life is the name of struggle; time after time, moment after moments there come a lot of physical and mental wars in life; who defeats all difficulties, dilemma, critical situation and makes the moment favorable to live S/He is winner in live.....superb poem penned on realistic life;

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Quoth Theraven 02 September 2020

Harrowing story., reminds me of John " Liver-Eating" Johnson aka John Jeremiah Garrison Johnston. The Crow know of his deeds.

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Belle Wassermeister 02 September 2020

Fantastic story, Cowboy! Congratulations on Poem of the Day! Wow! What an honor! Your account has only been active for what - - two months or so? I've been here over a year and it has never happened to me! You seem to have a natural talent.

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