Family History Part 01 Comments

This is a charmingly written family history poem.10+

I was going to say: " except for breaking your write/'poem' into stanzas/paragraphs, this doesn't seem poem-like to me." But, i just read your Poet's Notes and see you agree. A family history is interesting, esp. as this one 'starts'. i may visit the other parts of history later. bri, :)

Its a very good poem. When are you riding out in your red limo and come home with boot full of benjamins and lovely lass to boot....or have you done it already.

Great picture, Cowboy, and the history is fascinating! Give us more!