Sunday, June 23, 2013

Family Gathering In Recent Times.. Comments

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There is a group of people,
Gather after much persuasion,
The faces are not yet fierce,
But unpredictable,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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David Wood 24 June 2013

You bring up children in hardship and then they go out into the world and you are forgotten.

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Hans Vr 23 June 2013

yes, veeraiyah, let; s go back to simplicity and respect. A very recognisable situation The message in the poem is clear and melodiously penned. Good work

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