Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Family Blood Comments

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My screams become become whispers as they hit a human ear,
I fall to my knees and shatter the glass ground I was always standing on,
Eyes closed I run towards the edge not knowing when I will reach it,
And the fear causes my heart to beat slowly,
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Diego Adrian Manriquez
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Grace Klemmer 14 October 2011

I really like this one. I feel like I can relate to it quite well. I like the rhythm of it and how it flows together.

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