Monday, September 1, 2008

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The three of us sitting on the steps,
Chatting happily laughing at me,
Witnessed by the spongy clouds,
Descending opposite on hill-sides.
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Daniel Trevelyn Joseph
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Mamta Agarwal 01 September 2008

lovely poem, beautiful imagery, only a sensitive person attuned to nature can write like this. nature is MYSTERIOUS, PLAYFUL. Last four lines sum up well that we cannot understand everything.10 Mamta

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Daniel Trevelyn Joseph

Daniel Trevelyn Joseph

Mumbai, India
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