Tuesday, July 27, 2021

Familiar Visitor Comments

Rating: 4.0

They come for you-
in old fashioned hats,
from where you don't know,
to f uck you hard against every wall
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Tony Walton
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Luis A. Estable 27 July 2021

I could not see whom the they are who come for you. I find it too broad to narrow. But the theme is an interesting one.

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Tony Walton 12 February 2024

Why are you so literal? Do you know know what a metaphor is? Why not? I will now give you tons of constructive criticism, on your poetry.

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