Wednesday, July 2, 2014

Familiar Strangers Comments

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Glasses full, they gaze,
not focussed, a thousand yard stare.
Twisting in their seats,
squirming under the intimacy,
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Colleen Courtney 02 July 2014

This poem is so greatly detailed it's almost like watching a scene from a soap opera! Was captivated from the first line and not disappointed by the end. You've managed to paint a beautiful picture of a civilized mutual breakup. So very well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 02 July 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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