Thursday, January 30, 2014

Familiar Comments

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I touched her skin and she let me.
Mapping her small flaws and imperfections with my finger tips..
She asked if I came back because she was familiar
and I breathed in her scent... my tongue gently tasted her,
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Pauline Levesque
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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2014

Sensual in your compose... breathtaking in its essence... what a delicious image that you create in the mind's eye... a wonderful pen... thank you.

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Susan Lacovara 30 January 2014

Lovely and delicate how you make this sound so deliciously innocent. Well written scribe. PEACE

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