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we can dream, even if in hearts we know it never will be... whats life without a dream... david 10

Hi, David: I enjoyed this one, too. Great sentiment and we can all relate. I will make only one suggestion here: 'having our name known. Around the world, ' I think you need to leave off the period after 'known' so the line will enjamb to the next line correctly. best, diva

Exactly, are you talking about me David, if not you certainly did a good job of describing me. I would like to leave something for all to remember. Mainly I just want to leave something for my family and friends to remember. Hopefully my poems won't get lost and family and friends will continue to read them. It would of course be nice to know that those around the world read them as well. Wonderful poem David, I love it.---Melvina---