Saturday, May 1, 2010

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How can I still love you
when I don't love myself?
I did love you, I do love you,
but I needed you
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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 May 2010

eloquent flow of passion under the shadow yet faltering love, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 May 2010

eloquent flow of passion under shadow faltering, quite ingenious write,10++, thanks for sharing

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Ray Lucero 03 May 2010

Judy, Jesus once said 'Know thyself'. This is the key to attracting healthy partners and better friends. Peace, Ray

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Christian Marotte 02 May 2010

A well written sad love story

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Judy Meibach

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