Monday, December 9, 2019

False Step Comments

Rating: 5.0

He poured tears on his marital strife,
On problems of thankless married life,
Poor absent-minded him,
Lost in the world of dream,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 11 December 2019

Poor absent minded guy! Again he has to pay a heavy price for his foolish act! Very humorous!

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 December 2019

in happy time of conjugal life sometimes mind rider ghost comes to make trouble! !

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Anjandev Roy 09 December 2019

Wonderful, as usual. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 December 2019

Thanks indeed for liking it, poet Anjandev.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2019

A great humorous poem sir! Enjoyed......10+++++👍

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 December 2019

Appreciated, Dr Swain, both for the good words and rating.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 December 2019

A well crafted limerick, sir Aniruddha. A full 10++

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 December 2019

Thanks for appreciating this limerick, Rev Bernard F.A.

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