Tuesday, October 22, 2019

False O Man Thy Tears Shed Comments

Rating: 5.0

A day marked for women,
And my thoughts went to them.
And then back on to men.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2019

Muse of Shiva! ! Better with the secrets, Exposing who she really is. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 October 2019

Thanks for visiting this poem with dear poet Edward Louis.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 October 2019

But truth is nowhere near, And if shed, it's false tear. this is he crux o the poem half men we women woe of a man can't be ever understood ur verse is good

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 October 2019

It is so good to know, once in a while you also agree with me! ! ! LOL...and a big THANK YOU.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 October 2019

Lord Shiva is ardha-narishvar....Ardhange Iswara ardhange Parvati! A beautiful triolet sir! A very meaningful work....10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 October 2019

It is so good to know when reader/poets not only know what is stated, but add something to it. I appreciate your comments Dr Swain, many thanks.

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