Monday, March 23, 2009

False Ending? Comments

Rating: 2.8

If we lead a virtuous life,
the angels will come down
and they take us to a heavenly place.
If we live with mal intentions,
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Alex Gomez
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Karly Krasne 02 December 2009

Wow. You are talented. I love it. Thanks for your comment :) I enjoy reading your writing as well.

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thats a really good poem...

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wow..what a very positive outlook in life.. as there is hope., , there's life..

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Linda Weischedel 05 April 2009

Great poem Alex, highly enjoyed reading it.

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~ Jon London ~ 28 March 2009

A great piece of flowing poetry, well expressed my friend

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Stephen Black 23 March 2009

All's I can say is 'WOW'. This is definitely your best poem yet!

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