Friday, September 19, 2014

False Deity Comments

Rating: ★4.8

I forgot, these promises I made
To my false deity
The God of all things saved
I prayed, to the empty space
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Hayley Lewis
Battles
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Achill Lad 04 October 2014

Of a God who never saves the meek.............Sins brushed under a pulpit............................ Agree with you Hayley. Some nice touches in this poem. Logical thinking.

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Stephen Peter Mills 19 September 2014

'Sins brushed under a pulpit'... I love this line, very powerful.

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