Saturday, January 30, 2010

False Certainty Comments

Rating: 2.8

“I’m rich! I’m rich” I shouted harshly
I can buy all things highly
People surround me will like me immediately
Mostly, no one would hate me intentionally
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Kranthi Pothineni 01 May 2010

Interesting presentation. Nice one.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 April 2010

every verse... every line..... nice one!

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Auty Paul Jason 24 April 2010

I also wish i could live like that. Pretty nice poem Mr S.

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Whispering Rose 23 April 2010

a nice dream...nicely expressed

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Woo Who 23 April 2010

wow! the poem is nice I mean really! I am adding it to my favouriates! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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this poem is nice., i am happy it was just a dream

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 22 April 2010

interesting title that's awakening...good read.

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