Falling Up The Sky Comments

Brilliant! Breathtaking! Exhilarating! let me end here lest I run out of words++++10

This is so deftly written. I not only can see this unusual dance but I can feel it stretch my limbs.. I to.o am falling and I too think I'm flying. Your poem has effortless kinetic energy. It is so clear and unclutered. B-U-T all of this marvelous motion pales before the magical last two lines which raise the poem to a visionary height. What an amazing flash of self-knowledge. Your poem satisfies first my body, then my mind. Consider me one of your ideal readers.