Sunday, October 14, 2007

Falling Torrent Comments

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She has strength
and beauty.
she is blue sapphire
of clear glass falls.
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Rebekah Gamble
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Ben Gieske 01 January 2008

A ten for this. Your use of images is superb. You pack so much meaning into a few words. It deserves many readings and visuals. It is especailly meaningful after reading some of your other poems. Again belissimo. Truly, une oeuvre d'abilité.

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Ivor Hogg 01 January 2008

This conjured up a sharp visual of a stupendous waterfall. The last couplet is extremely strong

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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