Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Falling Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is nothing you can do,
To stop my tears from falling...
Even when I'm calling...calling...calling...
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Joscelyn Alderdice
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Eyan Desir 19 February 2009

I liked your poem, it was fun readin, but i wish it was a little longer, , , , , , , , but apart from that, you can feelin the emotion in this poem, overall i liked it

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