Friday, May 9, 2008

Falling Tears Comments

Rating: 4.2

So many tears have fallen from these pretty green eyes.
I just cant deal with anymore of your lies.
Too many cuts have formed from the hurtful words you've said.
Leave me here an empty body waiting for dead
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paige daniels
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Stephen Styris 14 May 2008

Nice poem...full of pain and betrayal...probably...but what do you mean by 'Green Eyes'?

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