Monday, August 3, 2009

Falling Stars Comments

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I fail miserably to see a reason to live
This broken life has nothing to give
My breath is wasted every single day
No one has time to hear what you have to say
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Yassar Ali
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 19 April 2010

Heartbreaking, i really felt it

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Anjali Sinha 02 November 2009

good write, falling stars-if only we are able to hold on to them how wonderful life would be..... -10 anjali

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Danny H 03 August 2009

This was wonderful, brilliant i loved reading this, i can relate to almost every line. yet as well in a different persepction 10+

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