Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Falling Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can you hear it?
My heart ripping apart
But you don’t care a bit
Why do I even bother?
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Allyson Gordon
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Dislocated Heart 19 March 2008

wow... i love the last part of your poem. i can kind of relate to this... great job!

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rohit sapra 04 March 2008

Really a nice poem though the pain which words reflect can actually be felt after reading it.

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Allyson Gordon

Allyson Gordon

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