Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Falling Star Comments

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“Have you seen a falling star? ”
A stranger asked me eagerly
I shrugged on reply
I know not star could be fall
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Niken Kusuma Wardani
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Khairul Ahsan 17 June 2018

Many people believe in many superstitions regarding falling stars or 'shooting stars'- meteors as they are called. It would be good to see you get some time to reply to the readers' comments.

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Kee Thampi 12 August 2009

saw a falling star! ” The glitter in his eyes dazzling He gently wrapped his dream and sealed with hope And let it fly back to the sky Yearning to reach the flash in time To granted him the best illusions nice to read... good to cheer

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Obinna Eruchie 15 June 2009

The imagery is captivating.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 February 2009

So many realistic and surrealistic images in this great poem. Fascinating stuff.

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Ency Bearis 12 August 2008

an inquesitive verses...which evolve concept of conscience...well written....thanks for sharing... Ency Bearis

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 12 August 2008

wonderful words! keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.

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