Falling Snow Comments

Snowflakes fall down on Earth when winter comes. Open wound's just too sore ripping and tearing sound is produced. A great imagery is drawn in this excellently penned poem. Switching off her inner light, snow gathering creates memory and emotion in mind. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.10

Wow....this is deep.....I think one could only write this from experience. You used the bleak imagery of snow very well to portray your feelings. Fine piece of writing Hazel......as always!

She suffers in his arms of lead. She smells defeat in his world of deceit very deep all through hazel

Such despair the whiteness of merciless snow. How I have known such as this You have gathered the skeins of despair and woven a triumph. Beautiful 10/10 BB

A passionate write expressing despair. Excellent.

There are a few apprehensions projected here that may not spell well for an anguished world of nature thrown into deep crisis of seasons. I am still impressed with the beauty of the write Hazel.

Wonderful write...Pain is very well expressed...Loved reading it.

A great poem, real emotion to it. Some times we all need that solitude of nothingness, a really great write.

silence is a tomb of lifeless lies.good one

silence is a tomb of lifeless lies.good one

The inside, frozen with grief is powerfully presented and the melancholy tone is gripping! ! A moving write! !

agree with Unwritten.. the imagery so details to represent sadness and sorrow in this poem the emotion that you put in so alive love to read it

the pain will not cease she wishes for an end to her torture. like the snow icy cold switching off her inner light

It sounds darker than the fallen snow in my mind thought...the poem that depict the detail and imagery in very well idea...the coldness can feel here as if the snow is falling now! _Soul