Falling Short Comments

And I understand that sticks and stones can hurt. Joe

This poem has the beautiful intensity of a fragile soul, Which is what a true poet is; and when our words are treated Without an honest attempt for understanding, it feels like murder, Good write, Amberlee.

No comments for this one? I find it beautiful, wonderful, crystal-clear. A wonderful description of an experience we've all had, of misplaced trust. A couple spelling errors or typos, 'blasphemy', for one. (as learned about my own work, typos stop the flow of a mind contemplating the poem, they interrupt the continuity.)