Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Falling Rain Comments

Rating: 4.4

The last wind of winter has ceased its power.
It is memory now, and has no message to give.

The rains of spring have replaced the snow.
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Adeline Foster 22 March 2014

The format of this poem was well done and exactly matched your intent. For another take on the subject read mine - Rain - Adeline

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A great free flowing and poem with vivid imagery and a plea for rain to bring a cleansing from within....10

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Raj Nandy 15 October 2009

You have indeed put it beautifully in your concluding lines! Let the rain cleanse our heart of all malice and hatred and fill it with love! 10! - Raj

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Susan Horvath 14 October 2009

Intense and rich as always

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Mike Levesque 14 October 2009

An impressive, mind-boggling well done write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2009

Oh falling rain, cleanse the dirt of the heart........it is rightly said sir..it not only washes dirt on the surface but from heart within..... with new message we endevour to see new things to emerge....lovely poem.....10 read mine... rain delay.. rain has come... o, mercy rain god....wathched helplessly..

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