Propose me if you want to marry me
And impress me if you love to walk
But don't use this natures beauty
Like moon, flowers, stars, dove, sky
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Everyday my first light should be you wonderful visual metaphor, wonderful lyric poem 10+++++++++
the structure of the poem is well organized and this is a fine literary piece.
a very powerful beautiful poem. the truth is in your words, for words are what describes everything in life and gives it the colors of beauty. GR888888T!
very cool poem! ! ! ! ! I really like the something that could only be you, good job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10)
Romance making in a different style, I find.