Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Falling Out Of Love Comments

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Every time I close my eyes I remember
I remember once upon a time when we used to be friends
When a hi would bring joy to each other's face and a bye tears to the eyes
Those where the good days
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Abdbulazziz Alhaider 10 August 2018

hi...beautiful senses beautiful poem

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Chinedu Dike 01 January 2015

A good narrative poem, well articulated and nice penned to capture a tragedy in bliss of love. Love is a spiritual experience that comes unannounced, if not carefully nurtured by both parties it goes without warning. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jide Pounds Ibitoye 01 August 2012

wow, a wow with a sorry, life could be fair and unfair sometimes. take it and move on, i invite you to read one of my poems uncertain, , I hope you have moved on fine......... good poem i tell you, great expression.

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