Friday, April 25, 2014

Falling Life Comments

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Life's members falling aside, as the rest of life goes on.

Yellowed with age, crippled by disease, alone and feeling
abandoned now that the children have grown and moved away.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Amitava Sur 27 April 2014

An excellent poem with a dream to envelop the mortal life after it's end and to merge it in the peaceful universe.Though it's melancholic but dreaming for all the pains and sorrows..... beautiful

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Susan Lacovara 25 April 2014

I would like to think that after a life that feeds us with such a frenzied pace, that the envelopment of peace and calm will cleanse my drifting days...and in the final season there will be blossoms that bloom with greater beauty. One can only wish that serenity and simplicity be granted in the design of death. I hope to ponder these thoughts for a very long time.......PEACE

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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