Tuesday, November 16, 2021

Falling Leaves - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many leaves come down
All at once in various hues
They are like small boats
Guided by the mighty wind
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 05 May 2025

Love adorns the humble like colorful fall leaves!

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Rebecca Navarre 12 February 2022

Such breathtaking beauty and imagery! .. Filled the wonders of nature! .. This is so Awesome! ..++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 February 2022

Wow! .. So beautifully described! .. Such a beautifully moving picture to heart and mind! .. Again another amazing poem! .. Beyond 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Aarzoo Mehek 21 November 2021

Brokenness in all forms is beautiful.

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Soran M. H 21 November 2021

Falling leaves in this poem remind us of the fate of the end in mankind, so why not be humble with these leaves because our destination is in the bosom of the earth, a beautiful glimpse of autumn and its rituals

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Soran M. H 21 November 2021

They are like small boats Guided by the mighty wind To adorn the humble ground.

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Kostas Lagos 19 November 2021

Perfect! Just perfect Rose Marie!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 November 2021

Loved the Tanka......100

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 November 2021

The poem is as beautiful as you, dearest Rose! Fabulous leaves carried by wind like boats.

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Anjandev Roy 17 November 2021

Glorious......as usual......

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Quaid-Uz- Zaman 17 November 2021

Neately composed. Beautiful tanka.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 November 2021

The ultimate and final journey of the leaves nicely written in the form of a tanka.5**

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 November 2021

At the moment of the falling leaves, nature shows its utmost beauty, the different shades exhibited and guided by the mighty wind, superb autumnal arrival 5 Stars full on Top

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David Wood 17 November 2021

A lovely autumnal poem showing natures full colours.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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