Many leaves come down
All at once in various hues
They are like small boats
Guided by the mighty wind
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Such breathtaking beauty and imagery! .. Filled the wonders of nature! .. This is so Awesome! ..++++++++++++
Wow! .. So beautifully described! .. Such a beautifully moving picture to heart and mind! .. Again another amazing poem! .. Beyond 5 Stars! ..+++++
Falling leaves in this poem remind us of the fate of the end in mankind, so why not be humble with these leaves because our destination is in the bosom of the earth, a beautiful glimpse of autumn and its rituals
They are like small boats Guided by the mighty wind To adorn the humble ground.
The poem is as beautiful as you, dearest Rose! Fabulous leaves carried by wind like boats.
The ultimate and final journey of the leaves nicely written in the form of a tanka.5**
At the moment of the falling leaves, nature shows its utmost beauty, the different shades exhibited and guided by the mighty wind, superb autumnal arrival 5 Stars full on Top
Love adorns the humble like colorful fall leaves!