Monday, December 26, 2011

Falling Leaves (Leaves Me Pondering) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Little orange leaves
Gathered and quaking,
Upon the tree
The wind is shaking -
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Smoky Hoss
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Brian Jani 13 July 2014

i like this poem which was written in an imaginative way.keep it up

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Chuck Audette 27 September 2012

Rest awhile on a pile of leaves and close your eyes and dream the dream they all must dream of flying to the skies.

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Juan Olivarez 03 January 2012

Yes all that will come to pass, excellent poetry my friend, a ten.

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Juan Olivarez 03 January 2012

Yes all that will come to pass, excellent poetry my friend, a ten.

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Eric Cockrell 27 December 2011

love this one... no more than falling leaves, but no less! we return to the source again!

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