Falling Into Spring Comments

ph CUT me off- -I give this aherd of 10's while sticking my tongue out at PH programing

I'm not sure what I am seeing here- - one poem recounting the cycle of seasons which would be very clever, my dear- - or 2 versions of the same poem, I waver between the two just like a fickle season would. This I can say for sure- -you can write lines that have a punch and deliver a message or two quite poetically. Gorgeous- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Too soon Winter will tip his hat to the earth As he covers it with blankets of white Dead on- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A death float of leaves soon scatter to & fro Out of line, dried brittle and breaking Cutting to the Quick- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Leafless trees stand in their stark nudity The middle to the end of Fall is what i am seeing. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -SO WELL WRITTEN