Falling Into Darkness Comments

I despise such nights and hope yours prove brief and infrequent.

A nice poetic imagination, Dohren. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

A poignant write with an utter feeling of losing everything and anything on this earth. perfect emotional expression. Thanks for sharing.

I have to agree with everything RoseAnn said, except that at first reading I didn't get the 'death' part. I thought it could have meant divorce or separation of some other sort. In any case, a well-written poem. Thank you for sharing with us.

A very intense and eerily haunting poem of lost love through death. A perfect portrayal of the emotions hiding beneath the surface. Excellent poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A perfect poetic expression of a melancholic mind, missing the love and the pleasing moments of life and reminiscing them in the darkness of the night. Thanks for sharing this feeling through your lovely poem, Valerie.

A superb and fantastic poem, very recognizable experience put in very poetic verses. I look very much forward to your next poem, Val.

An inspired piece of writing, Valerie

Hi Valerie, after a two year break I have started writing again. Lovely poem, memories can be like phantoms floating through your mind particularly when I think of my lovely wife Tina. Its been three years now. How are you?

Silence break our heart drifting thoughts to flow filling memories in mind cherished love before!

I find some kind of similarities in this poem and my own 'Alone In The Dark'. And your poem 'Alone' and my 'Loneliness'. Maybe in theme only. I consider your writing far superior though, but at the same time I think everyone has their own voice as poetry is an expression of oneself. There is so much I can learn from your writing. Looking forward to reading more by you.... Ayman

A wonderful description of a haunting memory. Another great poem written by one of the best. Welcome back.