Thursday, August 29, 2013

Falling Into Autumn~ Comments

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August is buttoning up all of her sunshine
Her southern winds are changing direction
While her daylight hours are growing shorter
As the month of September vies for our attention;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Joseph Narusiewicz 17 September 2013

I fall into her dreams like bright dying leaves

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Theodora Onken 06 September 2013

Patricia, so glad that you liked this poem. While i love Spring and Summer -Fall is always welcome as it offers us - who live in hot, hot climates a most wonderful break...if we are lucky an indian summer with temps that we are comfortable with - it always is a beautiful time - enjoy tremendously the bold, rich colours. I will check out your poems.

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Patricia Grantham 04 September 2013

This poem is so extravagantly beautiful in all of descriptions of Autumn. I especiall love this time of the year as the sweltering heat is about to cool down soon. The trees start to shed some of their leaves and the foliage is most colorful. I have three poems called Snowflakes, Diamonds in the Sky and Just Imagine. Please taker a look. Enjoyed this.

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