Falling In Love Poem by Ravi Kopra

Falling In Love

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When you see her for the first time
your eyes meet, you both smile
and you feel a stirring in your heart
an uncontrollable urge drives you crazy
to get to know her and have her in your arms
feel her hair her body with your hands
and feel like giving kisses on her mouth
that's lust and love mixed together -
the passion - you feel for her is marvellous
the elixir that renews your life
takes away all your wearniess
you are born again in love for life.
When you walk, you bounce up in the air
her love birds make a nest in your heart
their slightest flight your heart can't bear
and feels empty like the vast sky.
Your eyes shine, skin is bright, you smile
for no apparent reason, and your friends
ask you what has happened to you
as you exude sweetness all around you.
They don't know yet the love has stung you
that love birds now coo coo in your heart
and every moment she is in your thoughts,
you see her smiling face, her bright eyes
her body you desire merging into
and dream of seeing her again, soon.

Friday, April 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Passion makes the old medicine new:

Passion lops off the bough of weariness.

Passion is the elixir that renews:

how can there be weariness

when passion is present?

Oh, don't sigh heavily from fatigue:

seek passion, seek passion, seek passion!



-Rumi inMathnawi VI,4302-4304
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